Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response

1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. If you've received your feedback via email, you can simply cut and paste it from the email into your blog.

 WWW:

You have displayed some excellent editing and technical skills throughout this preliminary exercise. You have successfully demonstrated match-on-action coupled with superb costumes to establish the fantasy genre and also a setting to enhance the sense of fantasy genre too. Your use of SFX throughout helped communicate meaning to the audience.

EBI:
Some slight issues with the audio - the levels sounded uneven at the beginning and then towards the end consider fading the heartbeat SFX.

2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points (What Went Well) and three EBI bullet points (Even Better If) for your preliminary exercise. 

. Editing was great for my first time

. Acting was Great

. SFX was fantastic


EBI:

. More Fantasy. Seems a little Horror




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